Tevzi and Abisha REDONE

So, long time ago (a year) I took forever to do a commission, and the sketch turned out better than the final piece, blah blah blah. Point is, I recently got a second look at the sketch, and I barfed. Cause it was hideous.

So I redid it. It's still a sketch, but now it's prettier. And in both sepia toned and black and white.

Anyways, link to the story for this piece:
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